1. What are the strengths of your partner’s essay? Why?
I thought Harry did a good job of describing his vaction. He never repeated the same adjective twice so every expierence he descibed was new and not just a repeat of the last one.
2. What areas could use improvements? In other words, what suggestions can you give
your partner that will help his/her paper improve?
The only advice i would give Harry is to proof read his narravtive again. Just to make sure that all spelling and grammar errors are resolved before his final submition.
Harry used a lot of good similies and metaphors. My favorite was were he said his grandparents were "as calm as a cucumber"
4. What is the part of the paper that stands out as the most "catchy" or important?
the most important part of his essay i thought was the endong were he states that the good events in your life out weigh the bad ones.
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